Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Revised Digital Format Plus Back section


Let me know what you think.

This will completely wrap around a cardboard cylinder.
And wax covered on the inside.

Oh, and the The stripe at the bottom will go all around.
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9 comments:

  1. TONY F.February 17, 2009 at 11:17 AM

    Those designs are looking good. I like the die cuts, colors, and the fonts your are using. Everything seems to be working nicely. The first comp was good too, but these ones are better. These are simpler and cleaner. You get the message easily. Overall, great job.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2009 at 11:38 AM

    I like how these are looking but I sort of wish some of the colors were brighter.Maybe there is a way that the Adobo stamp you have there can be in different colors, and maybe you could try a slightly lighter colored craft paper so that all of the elements pop out more and have more contrast.

    -Kim

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  3. MandyFebruary 17, 2009 at 11:44 AM

    I really like it. I don't think I have anything to criticize honestly. One question though... if it's "Without Pepper"... what is it?

    Amanda

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  4. HedyehFebruary 17, 2009 at 2:17 PM

    Well done. I LOVE your design. It's fantastic. :)
    So, let me tell you why I like it so much. One thing that stood out to me is the texture of the paper you are using. It's very attractive and unique. The logo is really good too. Is it their logo or did you design it? The black stands out a lot on this paper and also the brush strokes are good too. The die-cut has added a lot of value to your design specially by having the circular text around it.

    Hedyeh

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  5. MudkickerFebruary 17, 2009 at 3:25 PM

    I think it looks great, not much to ay, you nailed it really.

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  6. Mary TovmasianFebruary 17, 2009 at 6:59 PM

    That looks really good. I like the fact that you went with the die cut, so we can see if it's almost finished or not.

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  7. nadiajFebruary 17, 2009 at 7:06 PM

    The designs is very well done. The colors on the strips are chosen well and it goes with the products.

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  8. John M.February 17, 2009 at 11:43 PM

    These look fantastic, and I can easily image what other products would coordinate with these. They look production ready. I have to echo other thought on one thing though…what is Without Pepper?" Does it mean w/o pepper corns or with out chile pepper?

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  9. Joe BautistaFebruary 18, 2009 at 6:56 PM

    also good work. looking forward to mockups

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